Writing- I am Poems


I am poem
I am (two special characteristics)

I wonder (something you are actually curious about)

I hear (an imaginary sound)

I see (an imaginary sight)

I want (an actual desire)

I am (the first line of the poem re stated)

 

I pretend (something you pretend to actually do)

I feel (a feeling about something imaginary)

I touch (an imaginary touch)

I worry (something that actually bothers you)

I cry (something that makes you very sad)

I am (the first line of the poem re stated)

 

I understand (something you know is true)

I say (something you believe in)

I dream (something you actually dream about)

I try (something you really make an effort about)

I hope (something you actually hope for)

I am (the first line of the poem re stated.
 
Following the template above, the students in my writing class completed following I am poems.
The poems allowed students to share their individuality, as well as their creativity with their imaginery pictures/sounds they created.
 
I am- By Omar
I am a happy, hyperactive boy
I wonder who invented school.
I hear screams of agony and pain
I see people running away from me
I want an endless supply of diamonds
I am a happy, hyperactive boy
 
I pretend I’m a happy hyperactive boy
I feel like flying
I worry about the world ending
I touch chocolate
I cry when I hurt myself
I am a happy, hyperactive boy
 
I understand I am not stupid
I say I am happy
I dream I’m Einstein
I try to be smart
I hope that no one dies by people
I am a happy hyperactive boy.
 
I am- By Eman
I am a young pretty girl
I wonder if I am cool
I hear Leila calling me
I see Zarifa laughing at me,
I want Faida to say Hi to me
I am a pretty young girl
I pretend to be Shrek
I feel excited to touch a whale
I touch the whales slippery skin
I worry if Maya doesn’t tell me her secrets
I cry when Miss Morris laughs at me
I am a pretty young girl
I understand what lions are saying,
I say do whatever you want,
I dream to be a princess.
I try to laugh but I cry
I hope Leila is okay
I am a pretty young girl

I am- By Crystal
I am a happy, dance loving girl
I wonder if I am ever going to do a dance together
I hear a puppy laughing
I see a puppy wearing a hat and socks
I want my parents to be proud of me
I am a happy, dance, loving girl
I pretend to be a teacher
  I feel happy to see a puppy wearing a cat
I touch a fluffy puppy
I worry when I go away from home for lots of days
I cry when me and my friends have fights
I am a happy, dance loving girl
I understand that not everyone gets what they want
I say don’t fight, be nice
I dream that the world will be kind
I hope that in the future I will be a dancer
I am happy, dance loving girl

I am- By Hilal
I am a footy lover
I wonder how the sea is made
I hear a football being kicked
I see a baby kicking the football
I want a gold football
I am a footy lover
 
I pretend to be a professional football player
I feel the gold football
I touch the gold football
I worry that I won’t be a good football player
I cry when I was a baby
I understand …
I say I turn my phone upside down
I dream that I can fly
I try to be stupid
I hope that the world doesn’t end
I am a footy lover
I  am- by Amani
I am a happy, friendly person
I wonder if I can cheer my sad friend up
I hear a scary voice in the woods of a girl screaming
I see my friend in the woods screaming help
I want a swimming pool
I am a happy, friendly person
I Pretend to get a job
I feel excited to see my friends at school
I touch the soft pillow I sleep on
I worry about the dog next door barking
I cry when someone kills another person
I understand that I try to be good
I say that people tease me
I dream to fly
I try to do my work better
I hope to go back overseas
I am a happy, friendly person.
I am- by Cihan
I am a happy soccer playing student
I wonder how the touch screen for devices are made
I hear my dog barking
I see a flying car
I want to be so rich
I am a happy, soccer playing student

I pretend to be a soccer player while I’m playing for my soccer club
I feel excited to see myself rich
I touch a golden soccer ball
I worry if my soccer team loses on the weekend
I cry when I was born

I understand how it feels to be upset
I say hello, goodbye, see you later
I dream to be rich
I try to score a goal for my soccer club
I hope I become rich when I get older
I am a happy soccer playing student.

I am- by Faida
I am a friendly happy sister
I wonder why rainbows are in the sky
I hear birds singing
I see ducks in the lake
I want a happy life
I am a friendly, happy sister

I pretend to cry
I feel happy about birds singing
I am a friendly, happy sister
 
I touch the kitten
I worry about everything
I cry when people scream
I am a friendly, happy sister
I understand that people should feel comfortable and safe
I say people should be treated good
I dream  to be a good sister
I try to look after my family
I hope everything is right
I am a friendly, happy sister
 
I am- by Ziyad
 I am a funny, older brother
                 I wonder if I am going to win the footy game on the weekends
I hear my brother snoring on the bed
I see Shrek eating his onions
I want a new movie of Shrek
I am a funny, older brother

 I pretend to snore like my brother
I feel Harry Potter’s wand
 
I touch air
I worry if Shrek’s breath stinks
I cry if I have a wedgie
I am a funny, older brother
I understand that I am a funny brother
I say that I like Shrek
I dream that I get a game of Shrek
I try to be like Shrek
I hope to be a professional footy player
I am a funny, older brother.

I am- by Maya
I am a lovely sister
I wonder how the future is going to be
I hear annoying laughs
I see I a lot of people
I want a dog
I am a loveable sister

I pretend to be a dog
I feel sad because I am in school
I touch an ugly cat
I worry for my friend
I cry when I am sad
 
I understand that I am the best
I say thank you to my slave
I dream about this school
I try to be a nerd
I hope that there is no more school
I am a loveable sister.

I am- by Saef
I am a footy card collector
I wonder how shoes were made
I hear talking trees
I see houses walking
I want all the footy cards
I am a footy card collector
I pretend to be an archer
I feel sad because I am not at home
I touch a bricks eyes
I worry il miss the game
I cry I don’t get what I want
 
I  understand what you say
I say I am always happy
I dream I am a king
I try to swag
I hope il go overseas
I am a footy card collector
 
I am- by Leila
I am a cute little girl
I wonder why they call me cool
I hear a prince calling me
I see a vampire right on top of me
I want a prince knocking on the door
I am a very pretty girl

I pretend  I was a girl
I feel excited the prince is knocking on the door
I touch my prince’s hair
I worry if he doesn’t knock
I cry if he doesn’t cry

I understand why you cry
I say I love you
I dream about a true tree
I try to explain to my mum
I hope to leave the school
I am a very cute girl.
 
I  am- by Khaldun
I am a happy, school student
I wonder how humans were made
I hear a flying car
I see birds feeding their babies
I want a gold football
I am a happy, school student
I pretend to be a king
I feel excited to be a king
I touch the kings crown
I worry I cant sleep tonight
I cry when my pet turtle dies
I understand that I don’t have the answers
I say treat people how you want to be treated
I dream to have unlimited money
I try to listen when the teacher is talking
I hope I win the Olympics
I am a happy, school student

I am- By Ozhan
I am a footy lover and a good student
I wonder if there will be flying cars in the future
I hear a dog barking
I see a flying fish
I want an endless supply of gold
I am a footy lover and a good student

I pretend to be rich
I feel like becoming a flesh eating zombie
I touch my skin
I worry that I have a lot of work to do
I cry when I get suspended.

I understand 
I say
I dream
I try
I hope
I am a footy lover
 
 
 
 

1 comment:

khaldun said...

There once was a old Nan who went to the beach and got a big tan she bought some fan-ta and turned into Santa.

when i stole some chocolate from the shops someone called the cops than i became a big mop.

when i ran from home i saw a phone that was made out of stone when i rang it it became foam